I did Mermaid for some other site so I thought I'd post it here too. My first attempt at an Okkervil lyric so please help me out with some blanks

Mermaid
So I said, men pull her out of the water
and then lay all hands
and bind back her flippers and tail
until international waters and there we'll feel
all thats human inside of her
So she's chilly and slick
on her hips where the scales meet with skin
with a sickening flick of her tail sickling?
her gills fill with cold salty water
and she thrashes(flashes?) and twirls
her freezing fins fluttering
But she's pretty I think
with a hand(head) dark as ink
and her belly bone white
and lips of the slices she shall pink ????
and she's turning the tubs rusty rim as the salt
water it flows out ????
Oh farewell is to the land we know well
we'll never be touching again
too fields where we ramble and ran
farewell to our ??? children
let's stand on the deck and let's watch
they'll all dissapear
And the days all float by and the days over ???
and the sky and the weeks slowly leak into years
the last dams are all left behind as we silently sail
into late some dark night
a wild wind starts to wail
and our map blows away and our compasses fail
And it's out on the lost boiling black water
where see it float out just so thin and so pale
as you rise
oh shes so fast and so fair?
my hands needing they press to a point in the air
when my mouth fills with a panic
then ??? my skull fills with a color
then can my heart fills with rope?
too much love to bear and I know it I stay
but she'll always be there
my hands soak in cold sand seaweed strum through her hair